Hi that’s a good start! Not wanna hate but! H can for a ur e practice on music chrome lab a really easy fun to make music for any one! And I started with it and now I can dj produce my own music and be a artist in the future goodluck!

That's good👍

There's only one thing offbeat here(in my opinion) but overall it's very good!

i want to make this better so bad- im doing it

It's good